It's not bad but I think there's room for improvement. At first the pacing is good and the relationship between the guy and the heroine feels natural. He sounds like I decent enough guy until it happens what was a total put off for me: so this guy is letting the heroine stay with him, he warns her not to enter one room in the apartment, but one day while he's out her curiosity is stronger and enters the room, he finds out and decides to give her a lesson by molesting her. I don't know if I was supossed to assume she was into it but I didn't like that development. I can deal with coercion in a story as long as it makes sense but to me it even felt forced storywise. The best part of this cd was without doubt Amano Haru-san's performance, his voice is always a treat to the ears!
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